Everywhere I Turn

Everywhere I turn,

the daffodils are making progress

in their return to glory.

Walking around the yard

and throughout the neighborhood

and in the drives over longer distances

they beckon me to notice them.

Everywhere I turn,

the foundational green stems call “Come back again soon. When I am ready!”

Everywhere I turn,

the start of the unraveling,

from peeling back, the pale-yellow skin

to reveal the glorious yellow cup and petals.

Everywhere I turn,

this year I have noticed how the daffodils bow their heads.

In my mind, I thought they were always upright, standing at attention.

Everywhere I turn,

I see the slight bow of the daffodil,

and I slightly bow to the beauty of nature.

4 responses to “Everywhere I Turn”

  1. They are popping up everywhere where I live as well. They are such a pretty site after a long dark winter

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  2. I love the use of repetition in this! 

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  3. I love the structure of this slice and how you kept coming back to the same phrase as you worked through the growth and your perception of daffodils and nature. Beautiful!

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  4. I love your use of the word “unraveling” in this poem. It’s like a little reminder that even this joy just beginning will end shortly–a reminder to enjoy the moment.

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